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     In the dry still of the night, the thunder of hooves echoed through the trees. Getting

faster, the pounding got louder and closer, and three moon white mustangs flew past. Manes

like a white fire flew in the wind as they ran. Soaring over logs and splashing into puddles,

the mustangs raced to a large clearing in the trees. Luscious grass and midnight-blue flowers

covered this clearing. It was the birthplace of the mustangs, the brothers of Birthplace

Cove. Mares from all over come to this spot to give birth, years later when the colts and

phillies grow up they come back. Sniffing the air, the eldest of the brothers walked further

into the clearing, the other two hesitated but followed. The oldest snorted and reared up,

his brothers doing the same. A thud was heard and the two oldest looked back; the youngest

had fallen onto his back. The older two walked over to their fallen brother and nuzzled

him, as if they were asking him if he was okay. He still had to learn how to keep balance.
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Heres ANOTHER little project I did for my writing class ^^ He.. Read it in front of the class :blush: I kinda liked it but I felt bad.. I dont like bragging ^^;

And. The thing that was on my mind is Darry, Sodapop, and Ponyboy XD I had the Outsiders on my mind when I wrote this. So. This revolves around the Curtis brothers as horses. lol.

Heres some comments he gave me! -

"Wow! Amazing imagery! You have an interesting topic, terrific word choices, and superb sensory images. I love the theme/purpose of describing the horses as a brotherhood. Well done!
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~JohnnyIsMyGoldSunset Mar 16, 2012  Student General Artist
That was really good! I liked how you made the connection! Really sweet :blush:

I've been missing all The Outsiders stuff on here recently :(
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~sonic4465 Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist
R-Really? :( And thanks!
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~JohnnyIsMyGoldSunset Mar 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah, I have. Seems like a lot have becom less passionate -sigh- But at least I can count on your art :D
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~sonic4465 Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist
Aw :<
T-Thankies! ^^
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~JohnnyIsMyGoldSunset Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem :hug:
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~sonic4465 Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist
W-Wanna rp? P-Please?
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